It is undeniable that sport has become an essential part of life. Playing sports makes you more disciplined, boosts energy, helps to be in shape and
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new relationships.
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, it minimises
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of various illnesses which are spreading rapidly because of our current lifestyle.
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doing sports decreases stress and enhances
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of dopamine -
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energiser of our mental health.
A commonly held belief is that everyone doing sports
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for others. I partially agree with
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a coin.
Firstly
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to mention, because one of the biggest priorities for us, is to make
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living.
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games or other tournaments of
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result,
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and desire of many young people around the globe to be as great as their idols.
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, good health conditions, which is the key to longevity.
On the other hand
, some people claim that professional athletes are not
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to be. It could be explained by the fact that many of them were caught
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cheating.
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to win in competition.
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some professional athletes could become narcissistic,
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their popularity and put themselves above others.
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, some of them put too much effort just to break a certain record not caring about their health, which can lead to serious injuries.
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would argue that professional athletes are people just like us. We all have flaws in our characters. Nobody is perfect. It’s important to understand how difficult it is to be in shape and compete with others in front of the millions. We should remember that, just because we look up to someone it doesn't mean that everything they say and do is right or appropriate. Only we know what will be good for us.