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Your friend has written you a letter. Part of it says: “What’s your favourite day of the week? I’d love to hear all about it”. Write a letter of about 100 words in reply.

#friend #part #“what’s #favourite #week #i’d #love #it”
Dear Jane, It’s been quite a long time since I
last
 heard from you. How are you doing? I hope all goes well with you. You
has
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 written me a letter to asked that what’s my favourite
day
 of the week. Today, I am writing to tell you about that. My most-liked
day
 is Saturday which is the
day
 I have a
day
 off during the week. I like that
day
 because I won't have to go to school but can hang out anywhere, even at home.
In addition
, every Saturday, I will wake up later than usual and
then
 can sit all
day
 watching movies or go out with friends. That’s interesting! By the way, could you tell me about your
favorite
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day
 of the week? Well, it’s time for me to go now. Don’t forget to write back to me. Looking forward to hearing from you. Best wishes, Trang.
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Language Accuracy
Be careful with subject-verb agreement, such as 'you has' should be 'you have.'
Language Accuracy
Try to avoid repetitive phrases like 'writing to tell you' and 'written me a letter to asked.' Consider revising for conciseness.
Structure and Organization
The letter is organized well with a clear introduction, main content, and conclusion.
Tone and Style
You successfully use a warm and friendly tone, appropriate for writing to a friend.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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