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The graph below shows the differences in wheat exports over three different areas. Write a report for a university lecture describing the information shown below.

The graph below shows the differences in wheat exports over three different areas. Write a report for a university lecture describing the information shown below.
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The graph illustrates the trends in
wheat
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exports
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 from
Australia
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,
Canada
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, and the
European
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Community
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 between 1985 and 1990.
Overall
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,
wheat
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exports
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 from these regions showed different patterns over the five-year period.
While
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 the export figures in 1990 did not dramatically differ from those in 1985, each region exhibited distinct trends throughout the intervening years. In 1985,
wheat
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exports
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 from
Australia
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,
Canada
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, and the
European
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Community
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 ranged between 15 to 20
million
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tonnes
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.
Australia
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's
wheat
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exports
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initially
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 rose from 15
million
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tonnes
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 in 1985 to approximately 17
million
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tonnes
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 in 1986.
However
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,
following
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this
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 increase, there was a gradual decline, reaching a low of around 12
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tonnes
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 by 1990.
In contrast
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,
Canada
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's
wheat
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exports
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 experienced more fluctuation. Starting at around 19
million
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tonnes
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 in 1985,
exports
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 remained relatively stable before rising to a peak of 25
million
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tonnes
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 in 1988.
Subsequently
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, there was a sharp decline, with
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 dropping to 15
million
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tonnes
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 in 1989, followed by a slight recovery to about 17
million
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tonnes
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 in 1990. The
European
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Community
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 displayed a consistent upward trend in
wheat
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exports
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. From approximately 17
million
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tonnes
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 in 1985,
exports
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 grew steadily, reaching over 20
million
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tonnes
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 by 1990.
This
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 made the
European
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Community
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 the leading exporter among the three regions by the end of the period. In summary, the
European
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Community
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 saw continuous growth in
wheat
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exports
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, ultimately leading in 1990.
Canada
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's
exports
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 were more volatile but ended the period slightly below their initial level.
Australia
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's
exports
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,
however
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, showed a clear downward trend, making it the lowest
expor
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export
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Basic structure: Use less body paragraphs.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words wheat, exports, australia, canada, european, community, million, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trends" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.
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