The table below shows the sales made by a coffee shop in an office build- ing on a typical weekday . Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features , and make comparisons where relevant .

The table below shows the sales made by a coffee shop in an office build- ing on a typical weekday .

 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features , and make comparisons where relevant .
The table below illustrates the
sales
made by a
coffee
shop in an office building on a typical weekday .
According to
the table the
sales
for
coffee
and
tea
at 7:30 till 10:30 was 265 for
coffee
and 110 for
tea
at 10:30 till 2:30 the
sales
for
coffee
kept increasing to 185 and we can see that the
sales
for
tea
decline to 50
then
at 2:30 till 5:30 the
sales
for
coffee
fell slightly to 145 and the
sales
for
tea
dropped sharply to 35 , after that at 5:30 till 8:30 the
coffee
sales
increased again to 200 and the
sales
for
tea
improved a little bit to 75 .  We can see
also
the difference between
pastries
and sandwiches
sales
at 7:30 till 10:30 the
pastries
sales
were 275 and the sandwiches was only 50 ,
then
at 10:30 till 2:30 it increased quickly to 200 and the
pastries
dropped sharply to 95 after that at 2:30 till 5:30 it increased to 150 and the sandwiches ,
sales
decreased dramatically to 40
finally
at 5:30 till 8:30 it jumped to 110
sales
and the
pastries
sales
declined to 80 .
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