The table below shows the sales made by a coffee shop in an office build- ing on a typical weekday . Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features , and make comparisons where relevant .

The table below shows the sales made by a coffee shop in an office build- ing on a typical weekday .

 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features , and make comparisons where relevant .
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The table below illustrates the
sales
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made by a
coffee
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shop in an office building on a typical weekday .
According to
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the table the
sales
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for
coffee
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and
tea
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at 7:30 till 10:30 was 265 for
coffee
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and 110 for
tea
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at 10:30 till 2:30 the
sales
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for
coffee
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kept increasing to 185 and we can see that the
sales
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for
tea
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decline to 50
then
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at 2:30 till 5:30 the
sales
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for
coffee
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fell slightly to 145 and the
sales
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for
tea
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dropped sharply to 35 , after that at 5:30 till 8:30 the
coffee
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sales
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increased again to 200 and the
sales
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for
tea
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improved a little bit to 75 .  We can see
also
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the difference between
pastries
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and sandwiches
sales
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at 7:30 till 10:30 the
pastries
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sales
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were 275 and the sandwiches was only 50 ,
then
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at 10:30 till 2:30 it increased quickly to 200 and the
pastries
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dropped sharply to 95 after that at 2:30 till 5:30 it increased to 150 and the sandwiches ,
sales
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decreased dramatically to 40
finally
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at 5:30 till 8:30 it jumped to 110
sales
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and the
pastries
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sales
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declined to 80 .
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 82%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, coffee, tea, pastries with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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