The maps below show Hunderstone town at present and a proposed plan for it.

The given maps illustrate

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the

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Hunderson area now and the

futute

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future

development of the construction.

Overall

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it is clear that

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the

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proposed plan everything remained unchanged

such

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as the town centre, railway, gas station and a roundabout on the west side, except the two things:

air field

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airfield

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and a new roundabout. There are new roads which connect all locations together.

Firstly

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, at present, there is

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apply

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only

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road

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a road

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which connects

centre

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the centre

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and

air

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the air

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place.

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, near the town located area which is called build-up ring

road

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. As it seems, there

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are

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only 2 roads.

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, it is obvious that circle

shaped

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circle-shaped

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road

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which

is connects

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connects

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all facilities with each other, constructed in the middle of the railway.

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the previous

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air filled turned into

ring

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a ring

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road

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whereas

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remained amenities

still

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were still

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unchanged.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

131 words

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