The graph below shows the rate of smoking per 1000 people in Someland from 1960 to 2000. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information in the graph below.

The line graph gives information about the average number of smoking people per 1,000 individuals in Someland over

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40-years

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40-year

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. Looking at the

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perspective, it can be seen that

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rate enjoyed an increase,

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the proportion of men declined over the

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with, despite the initial low number of smoking women at about 100 per 1,000 people, it grew significantly to 200 in 1965 till 1970, and to 300 after 5 years.

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, the trend was followed by a gradual decrease from 1975 to 1990.

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,

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it plunged to 200,

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showing that

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trend of smoking among women started reducing. Regarding men`s line,

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it experienced the opposite of women`s proportion.

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with approximately 600 males per 1,000 people, it underwent a steady decrease till 1970, reaching 500 by 1975.

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same as females, local males continued quitting smoking and accounted for nearly 400 in 1985 and

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300 in 1995, reaching

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lowest point at almost 200

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the end of the

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