The given line graph illustrates the proportion of people who live in cities in various SouthEast Asia nations over a span of 30 years, from 1970 to 2020 and forecast between 2030 and 2040.

The given line graph illustrates the proportion of people who live in

cities

in various SouthEast Asia nations over a span of 30 years, from 1970 to 2020 and forecast between 2030 and 2040.

Overall

, there is a significant increase in the population living in

cities

of all countries, with the

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for Malaysia being the highest throughout the entire time frame, and the

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of individuals living in urban areas in

Indonesia

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to overtake Thailand and

Indonesia

in order to dominate the second position.

According to

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cities

in Malaysia took the top in

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,

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rose steadily to reach its peak of 75% in 2020(compared to 1970 was 30%),

while

that of the Philippines rose and fell, standing at just above 30%

initially

, after which it grew to nearly 50%, and

then

experienced a dramatic decrease to 40% in 2010, and after a decade

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climbed to 45%.

Indonesia

and Thailand witnessed a rise, respectively, the

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for the former shot up to 50% in 2020 after half a century, starting from 1970(only 15%), and the number of people living in urban areas in the latter slightly increased to 30% in 2020. As regards Malaysia, the prediction for

this

country is that it still dominates the lead,

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percentage of

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in

cities

in

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nation accounting for 90% in both 2030 and 2040. Ranking second is the

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for

Indonesia

, the forecast for

this

country will be about 50% to 53% in 2030 and

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10 years, respectively.

Following

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are the Philippines and Thailand, the increasing rate of people in urban areas for the former is approximately 45% in both 2030 and 2040,

while

that of the latter is about 30% in 2030 and will rocket to 40% after a decade.