The pie chart show the reasons for immigrants to a European country in 2009 and reasons for immigrants from a European country in 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the mein features and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie chart show the reasons for immigrants to a European country in 2009 and reasons for immigrants from a European country in 2009.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the mein features and make comparisons where relevant.
The charts compare why
people
immigrate to a
European
country
and immigrate from the
country
in terms of six different reasons in 2009.
Overall
,
it is clear that
most
people
came to a
European
country
to accompany or family and most
people
left the
country
to work. The least
immigrants
came and left the
country
without any reason. In 2009, the largest
proportion
of
immigrants
came to a
European
country
because of family or accompany, which represented 25% of the total
immigrants
. The number of
immigrants
who came for
the
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definite
job
, was quite lower than that, at 23%. The figures for looking
job
and other reasons were the same as those for studying, at 15%. The smallest
proportion
of
people
immigrate to the
country
without any reason. In 2009, the largest
proportion
of
people
left a
European
country
due to
definite jobs, which represented 38% of the total
immigrants
. The indicator of other reasons for leaving was considerably lower than that, at 23%. The figures for family, looking for a
job
and studying were relatively similar, at 15 for family, 13% for looking for a
job
and 7% for studying. The smallest
proportion
of
immigrants
left the
country
without any reason, at 4%.
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