The line graph below shows radio and television audiences throughout the day in 1992.

The line graph below shows radio and television audiences throughout the day in 1992.
At a glance at the line graph provided reveals the ratio of British audiences among radio and television in different periods of a day in December 1992.
Overall
, more people listened to the radio in the morning,
while
the majority of the British watched TV from the evening till midnight. It is apparent from the information supplied that people in Britain only spent their time listening to the radio during the daytime. Increasing from approximately 8 per
cent
at 6 o'clock in the morning to nearly 30 per
cent
at 9 o'clock, the ratio of listeners
then
plunged to a low of 12 per
cent
at 3 o'clock in the afternoon. The latter half of the day,
however
, brought a constant decline in
this
figure. The audiences of British television, meanwhile, fluctuated at somewhere between 0 and 18 per
cent
prior to 2pm, before increasing exponentially to somewhere in the vicinity of 50 per
cent
in the evening (from 4pm to 8pm). The viewers dropped sharply to less than 5 per
cent
for the rest of the day.
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