This diagrams show a structure that is used to generate electricity from wave power.
The illustrations present the process of
wave
power
electricity
production.
Overall
, the wave
is clearly important to the process. The power
station
must be strictly constrcuted
at the cliff or the Correct your spelling
constructed
sea
wall. Interestingly, the sea
water is not used to produce the
Correct article usage
apply
electricity
.
First,
the structure of the wave
power
station
is built by the cliff or the sea
wall in order to gain most of the air which is trapped and used for turninbg
the turbines when the Correct your spelling
turning
wave
hits the structure wall of the chamber. The chamber (a part of the station
) is built in the sea
to let the wave
comes
in and out.
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come
Next,
the air leaving the chamber travels up the structure to turn the turbine which always turn
at the same Change the verb form
turns
dirtection
, and Correct your spelling
direction
this
is where the electricity
is generated. Also
, some air is then
relased
out of the Correct your spelling
released
colum
into the higher level of the atmosphere. It is interesting that the Correct your spelling
column
sea
water is in fact not the
part of the production process.
In conclusion, Correct article usage
apply
this
sort of renewabel
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renewable
power
relies on the geographoical
factor as the stronger the Correct your spelling
geographical
wave
is, the more electricity
is produced although
this
could lead to the
change Correct article usage
a
of
the Change preposition
in
contry's
geographical coast where the coast is used as the site of the Correct your spelling
country's
wave
power
station
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Vocabulary: Replace the words wave, power, electricity, station, sea with synonyms.
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