This diagrams show a structure that is used to generate electricity from wave power.

This diagrams show a structure that is used to generate electricity from wave power.
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The illustrations present the process of
wave
power
electricity
production.
Overall
, the
wave
is clearly important to the process. The
power
station
must be strictly
constrcuted
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constructed
at the cliff or the
sea
wall. Interestingly, the
sea
water is not used to produce
the
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electricity
.
First,
the structure of the
wave
power
station
is built by the cliff or the
sea
wall in order to gain most of the air which is trapped and used for
turninbg
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turning
the turbines when the
wave
hits the structure wall of the chamber. The chamber (a part of the
station
) is built in the
sea
to let the
wave
comes
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in and out.
Next,
the air leaving the chamber travels up the structure to turn the turbine which always
turn
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at the same
dirtection
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direction
, and
this
is where the
electricity
is generated.
Also
, some air is
then
relased
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released
out of the
colum
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column
into the higher level of the atmosphere. It is interesting that the
sea
water is in fact not
the
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part of the production process. In conclusion,
this
sort of
renewabel
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renewable
power
relies on the
geographoical
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geographical
factor as the stronger the
wave
is, the more
electricity
is produced
although
this
could lead to
the
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change
of
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the
contry's
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country's
geographical coast where the coast is used as the site of the
wave
power
station
.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words wave, power, electricity, station, sea with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "wave" was used 7 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Wave power
  • Offshore
  • Kinetic energy
  • Renewable energy
  • Buoy
  • Turbine
  • Generator
  • Carbon footprint
  • Ecosystems
  • Sustainability
  • Energy portfolio
  • Scalability
  • Power grid
  • Marine environment
  • Economic viability
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