The chart below show percentages of water used in different sectors in Sydney, Australia in 1997 and 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
These pie charts provide information about
water
usage
in various sectors in Sydney, from 1997 to 2007.
Overall
, it is clear that
the food industry
sector
used so much water
, and water
usage
was low in building sectors in both periods. The service industry
sector
percentage increased slightly in the second chart.
The food industry
was almost the biggest one in using water
in both periods, at 48 and 41 per cent
respectively. Water
usage
for manufacturing was 15 per cent
in 1997, then
it decreased slightly to 11 per cent
in the following year. Moreover
, water
usage
for the household sector
was also
the biggest one in both charts, and it stood at 19 percent
and 21 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
respectively in 1997 and 2007.
The service Change the spelling
per cent
industry
sector
accounted for 13 per cent
in 1997, and it experienced a big increase, to 25 per cent
in 2007. Also
, water
usage
for the building industry
accounted for 5%, then
it fell to 2% in 2007.Submitted by makemoneyizzy16 on
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