The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart illustrates beverage buying habits in five cities in Australia, which are
Sydney
, Melbourne
, Brisbane
, Adelaide
and Hobart
.
Overall
, residents who went to cafe
for Add an article
a cafe
the cafe
coffee
or tea in last
4 Correct article usage
the last
weeks
takes
the majority in five Australian cities, except for Correct subject-verb agreement
take
Adelaide
, where people who bought instant coffee
in last
4 Correct article usage
the last
weeks
takes
Correct subject-verb agreement
take
highest
proportion. Change the article
the highest
Furthermore
, people who bought fresh coffee
in last
4 Correct article usage
the last
weeks
takes
Correct subject-verb agreement
take
little
proportion Correct word choice
a small
in
five Australian cities.
The percentage of people who lived in Change preposition
of
Melbourne
and Hobart
who went to cafe
for Fix the agreement mistake
cafes
coffee
or tea in last
4 Correct article usage
the last
weeks
take
around 64%, and Verb problem
is
then
is
Correct pronoun usage
there is
Sydney
, Brisbane
and Adelaide
, which is above 60%, around 55% and close to 50% respectively.
For those who bought instant coffee
in last
4 Correct article usage
the last
weeks
in Brisbane
and Hobart
, their percentage is between 50% and 55%, whereas
others is
from 45% to 50%. The ranking is Change the verb form
are
Hobart
, Brisbane
, Adelaide
, Melbourne
and Sydney
. In terms of buying frech
Correct your spelling
fresh
coffee
, none of them above
45%, Add a missing verb
are above
while
Sydney
is close to and Melbourne
just
over 40%. Both the Add a missing verb
is just
residence
of Replace the word
residents
Brisbane
and Adelaide
are slightly under 35%.Submitted by yushin20020625 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sydney, melbourne, brisbane, adelaide, hobart, coffee, weeks with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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