The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The process shows how the brick is manufactured for the building industry. In general, the diagram can be separated
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7 steps in the production of
bricks
starting with digging
clay
and ending with the delivery of
bricks
. First of all, the
clay
needed to make
bricks
is dug from the earth with
digger
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a digger
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.
Then
, the dug
clay
is spread on the metal grid and sorted by their size.
Next,
sand and water
is
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added to the
clay
and divided
to
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two parts: wire
culter
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cutter
and mould for their shape.
Following
this
, the
bricks
are placed for drying in the oven for 24-48 hours.
Subsequently
, they are heated in
kiln
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at
the
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a
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moderate temperature of 200C - 980C
then
temperature
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the temperature
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is increased to 870C-1300C. After that, it is placed for cooling in
chamber
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for
2-3days
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2-3 days
. In the end, the
bricks
is prepare
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is prepared
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for packing and
deliver
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delivered
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to the industry by
the
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apply
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truck.
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