The below chart gives information the data of immigration, emigration and net migration in UK between 1999 and 2008.
The bar chart and line graph present the information including immigration, emigration, and net results of international entrances between 1999 and 2008 in the UK.
Overall
, it is noticeable that the trends of both immigrants and emigrants were almost an upward trend throughout a
decade. The total of immigration was the highest in 2004 internationally.
From 2004 to 2008, the net of Correct article usage
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people
traveling
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were
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a
higher than Correct article usage
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last
five year
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above
200 thousand, exception Change preposition
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in
2008 with approximately 160 thousand Change preposition
of
people
, and the sum of immigrants and emigrants reached a peak at around 250 in 2004. Comparison
with the Change preposition
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last
five years, there were all
just over 150 thousand who stayed in the United Kingdom.
Within a decade, the immigration was a Correct determiner usage
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slightly
increase from about 0.45 Change the adverb
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million
people
to nearly 0.6 million
. People
taking out from the UK rose minimally from just above 0.3 million
to roughly 4.2 million
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