The chart below shows the percentage of the population in the UK who consumed the recommended daily amount of fruit and vegetables in 2002, 2006 and 2010
This
graphic illustrates the proportion of men, women
and children in the UK ingesting the recommeded
amount of fruits and vegetables in three years.
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recommended
Overall
, women
came out first in taking enough fruits and vegetables and the reverse was true for children.
The highest figure for women
having adequate intake was observed in 2006 at approximately one-third of total
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the total
while
that for men was 28 per cent in that year. The second highest numbers for women
and men were in 2010 at 27 and 24 per cent respectively.The least
proportion of ladies and gents in Correct word choice
lowest
this
regard was seen in 2002 with figure
slightly less than those of 2010.
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figures
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the other hand, were least likely to have sufficient healthy diet components with Add the comma(s)
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lowest
numbers seen in 2002 at 11 Correct article usage
the lowest
percent
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per cent
This
figure rose slightly to peak at 16 percent
in 2006 only to drop marginally again by 2 per cent in 2010.Change the spelling
per cent
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