The chart below shows the percentage of the population in the UK who consumed the recommended daily amount of fruit and vegetables in 2002, 2006 and 2010

The chart below shows the percentage of the population in the UK who consumed the recommended daily amount of fruit and vegetables in 2002, 2006 and 2010
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graphic illustrates the proportion of men,
women
and children in the UK ingesting the
recommeded
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recommended
amount of fruits and vegetables in three years.
Overall
,
women
came out first in taking enough fruits and vegetables and the reverse was true for children. The highest figure for
women
having adequate intake was observed in 2006 at approximately one-third of
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while
that for men was 28 per cent in that year. The second highest numbers for
women
and men were in 2010 at 27 and 24 per cent respectively.The
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proportion of ladies and gents in
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regard was seen in 2002 with
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slightly less than those of 2010. Children
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the other hand, were least likely to have sufficient healthy diet components with
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numbers seen in 2002 at 11
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.
This
figure rose slightly to peak at 16
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in 2006 only to drop marginally again by 2 per cent in 2010.
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