The map below is of the town of Garlsdon. A new supermarket (S) is planned for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

this

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map

is showing

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A

town

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called Garlsdon.

the

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(S) sample is about a

supermarket

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. the

supermarket

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is planned for the

town

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. the map shows two possible ways for the

suopermarket

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supermarket

. as we can see

that

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apply

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the

town

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has two railways and

also

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thre

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three

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is

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are

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two Housing spots one is on top of the

town

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the

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and the

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other one is below the

town

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Center, around the center there is

a

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an

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industry area, and around all that there is the countryside. we can see

thet

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that

the population of the

town

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is 65k, the top main road has

Hindon

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a Hindon

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population

10k

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of 10k

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, and

the

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on the

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left down there is the Brandon with 15k

popualtion

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population

and

in

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on

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the right down of the

town

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there is 29k Cransdon, we can see that the

frist

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first

supermarket

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will be in the top left next to the Hindon road, And the other

supermarket

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is in the

center

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centre

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of the

town

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.