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The chart and table below show the average number of children born to one woman and the average age of women when they had their first child in two countries between 1920 and 2019.

The chart and table below show the average number of children born to one woman and the average age of women when they had their first child in two countries between 1920 and 2019.
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The line graph illustrates a comparison between the UK and
Kazakhstan
 and the
number
 of
children
 born to
women
 in these countries between the
year
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years
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 1920 and 2019.
While
 the table indicates the average
age
 of
women
 from both countries when they had given birth
their
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to their
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 first child.
Overall
, it can be seen that
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Kazakhstan
women
 maintained
the
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a
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 higher
number
 of
children
 born in the country than
the
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in the
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 United Kingdom
between
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during
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 the abovementioned Period.
Moreover
, the trend of younger
women
 giving birth in
Kazakhstan
compare
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compared
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 to the
British
women
 continued. In
the
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1920,
average
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the average
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number
 of
children
 born to a
Kazakh
 woman in comparison to
a
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British women
a British woman
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British
women
 was about 3.5 and 2 respectively. The
number
 rose in 1960 to 4.5
children
 born to
women
 from
Kazakhstan
,
while
 slightly increased to 2.5 in the case of
British
women
. These figures significantly dropped for
Kazakh
women
 from 4.5 to 2.5 and later increased only by 0.5 (
that is
 3) in almost two decades.
Whereas
 with a slight dip 1.5
children
 per
British
women
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woman
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 was seen in 2019. As per the table, in
the
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1920, the average
age
 of the
Kazakh
 woman to have
first
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her first
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 child was 23.5
while
 it was 3 years above for
the
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British
women
.
This
differ
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difference
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 was reduced in 1980 between the UK and
Kazakhstan
 with
age
 26.5 and 26 respectively. It was evident that by the year 2019, the
age
 of a
Kazakh
 woman giving birth deferred by almost 4 years.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 76%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words kazakhstan, number, children, women, age, british, kazakh with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "comparison" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • fertility rate
  • average age of childbirth
  • demographic changes
  • trend analysis
  • birth rate
  • cultural factors
  • economic influences
  • social dynamics
  • societal implications
  • population growth
  • comparative analysis
  • historical data
  • child rearing
  • family planning
  • maternal age
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