The chart and table below show the average number of children born to one woman and the average age of women when they had their first child in two countries between 1920 and 2019.
The line graph illustrates a comparison between the UK and
Kazakhstan
and the Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
children
born to Use synonyms
women
in these countries between the Use synonyms
year
1920 and 2019. Fix the agreement mistake
years
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the table indicates the average Linking Words
age
of Use synonyms
women
from both countries when they had given birth Use synonyms
their
first child.
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to their
Overall
, it can be seen that Linking Words
the
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apply
Kazakhstan
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women
maintained Use synonyms
the
higher Correct article usage
a
number
of Use synonyms
children
born in the country than Use synonyms
the
United Kingdom Change preposition
in the
between
the abovementioned Period. Change preposition
during
Moreover
, the trend of younger Linking Words
women
giving birth in Use synonyms
Kazakhstan
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compare
to the Change the form of the verb
compared
British
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women
continued.
In Use synonyms
the
1920, Change the article
apply
average
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the average
number
of Use synonyms
children
born to a Use synonyms
Kazakh
woman in comparison to Use synonyms
a
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British women
a British woman
British
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women
was about 3.5 and 2 respectively. The Use synonyms
number
rose in 1960 to 4.5 Use synonyms
children
born to Use synonyms
women
from Use synonyms
Kazakhstan
, Use synonyms
while
slightly increased to 2.5 in the case of Linking Words
British
Use synonyms
women
. These figures significantly dropped for Use synonyms
Kazakh
Use synonyms
women
from 4.5 to 2.5 and later increased only by 0.5 (Use synonyms
that is
3) in almost two decades. Linking Words
Whereas
with a slight dip 1.5 Linking Words
children
per Use synonyms
British
Use synonyms
Use synonyms
women
was seen in 2019.
As per the table, in Fix the agreement mistake
woman
the
1920, the average Change the article
apply
age
of the Use synonyms
Kazakh
woman to have Use synonyms
first
child was 23.5 Correct pronoun usage
her first
while
it was 3 years above for Linking Words
the
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apply
British
Use synonyms
women
. Use synonyms
This
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differ
was reduced in 1980 between the UK and Replace the word
difference
Kazakhstan
with Use synonyms
age
26.5 and 26 respectively. It was evident that by the year 2019, the Use synonyms
age
of a Use synonyms
Kazakh
woman giving birth deferred by almost 4 years.Use synonyms
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