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the diagram below shows the life cycle of the honey bee. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

the diagram below shows the life cycle of the honey bee. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given natural process illustrates the data of the life cycle of the
honey
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bee
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 which takes 34- 36
days
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.
Overall
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, it can be easily seen that
this
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 creative cycle is comprised of 7 stages commencing with laying
eggs
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 and culminating with being
adult
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an adult
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honey
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bee
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.
To begin
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 with, it can be observed that in the beginning
eggs
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 which females lay every
there
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three
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days
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 hatch after 9 to 10
days
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. In the third
step
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, after 5
days
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,
eggs
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 are naturally broken and small
honey
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 bees start to fly. It is followed by 2 growing times which are
fourth
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the fourth
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step
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by
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in
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 7
days
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 and
fifth
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the fifth
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step
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by
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in
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 9
days
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.
However
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, the diagram points out that
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honey
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the honey
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bee
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 in the fifth
step
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 is nymph moults 3 times as it grows. In the penultimate
step
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, after
growing
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the growing
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 period
honey
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bee
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 transformed
to
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into
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young
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a young
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 adult
emerges
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apply
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.
Finally
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, adult
honey
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 bees
ready
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are ready
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 to lay
eggs
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. All in all,
this
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 is a relatively complicated and natural life cycle and it totally takes 34 to 36
days
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.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words honey, bee, days, eggs, step with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • life cycle
  • laying of eggs
  • queen bee
  • hatch into larvae
  • rapid growth
  • develop into pupae
  • significant transformation
  • emergence of the adult bee
  • matures fully
  • cyclical nature
  • colony’s survival
  • reproduction process
  • subsequent generations
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