the diagram below shows the life cycle of the honey bee. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given natural process illustrates the data of the life cycle of the
honey
bee
which takes 34- 36 days
. Overall
, it can be easily seen that this
creative cycle is comprised of 7 stages commencing with laying eggs
and culminating with being adult
Add an article
an adult
honey
bee
.
To begin
with, it can be observed that in the beginning eggs
which females lay every there
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three
days
hatch after 9 to 10 days
. In the third step
, after 5 days
, eggs
are naturally broken and small honey
bees start to fly. It is followed by 2 growing times which are fourth
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the fourth
step
by
7 Change preposition
in
days
and fifth
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the fifth
step
by
9 Change preposition
in
days
. However
, the diagram points out that honey
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the honey
bee
in the fifth step
is nymph moults 3 times as it grows. In the penultimate step
, after growing
period Correct article usage
the growing
honey
bee
transformed to
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into
young
adultCorrect article usage
a young
emerges
. Verb problem
apply
Finally
, adult honey
bees ready
to lay Add a missing verb
are ready
eggs
.
All in all, this
is a relatively complicated and natural life cycle and it totally takes 34 to 36 days
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words honey, bee, days, eggs, step with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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