The chart and table below show the average number of children born to one woman and the average age of women when they had their first child in two countries between 1920 and 2019
The line graph illustrates a comparison between the United Kingdom and
Kazakhstan
and the number
of children
born to women
in these countries between the years 1920 and 2019. The table indicates the average age of women
from both countries when they gave birth to their first child.
Overall
, it can be seen that Kazakhstani women
maintained a higher number
of children
born in the country than the
United Kingdom during the aforementioned period. Change preposition
in the
Moreover
, the trend of younger women
giving birth in Kazakhstan
compared to the
Correct article usage
apply
British
women
continued.
In 1920, the average number
of children
born to a Kazakh
woman
in comparison to a British
woman
was about 3.5 and 2 respectively. The number
rose in 1960 to 4.5 children
born to women
from Kazakhstan
, while
slightly increasing to 2.5 in the case of British
women
. These figures significantly dropped for Kazakh
women
from 4.5 to 2.5 and later increased only by 0.5 (that was, 3) in almost two decades. Whereas
with a slight dip 1.5 children
per British
woman
was seen in 2019.
As per the table, in 1920, the average age of the Kazakh
woman
to have her first child was 23.5, while
it was 3 years above for the British
women
. This
difference was reduced in 1980 between the UK and Kazakhstan
with ages 26.5 and 26 respectively. It was evident that by the year 2019, the age of a Kazakh
woman
giving birth deferred to almost 4 years.Submitted by atulbhujbal on
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