Topic: The charts below give information on the consumption of water by agricultural products in Australia in 2014, and the share of income they produced.

Topic: The charts below give information on the consumption of water by agricultural products in Australia in 2014, and the share of income they produced.
✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
The supplied pie
charts
Use synonyms
illustrate how much
water
Use synonyms
was consumed by agricultural products and some data about the income generation of them in Australia in 2014.
Overall
Linking Words
, both
charts
Use synonyms
include 6 segments with livestock and fruit being the most remarkable in the former and latter
charts
Use synonyms
. Generally speaking, some parts had the same percentage in the pie
charts
Use synonyms
. As can be seen, approximately two-thirds of the
water
Use synonyms
consumption
chart
Use synonyms
contained livestock, and the opposite is true for the second
chart
Use synonyms
which included only 5% of it.
Moreover
Linking Words
, 36% of salary was generated from fruit
while
Linking Words
its section was 21% for consuming
water
Use synonyms
. It is clearly shown that both sugar's and other's segments were the same in the pie
chart
Use synonyms
with 10% for the former and 9% for the latter.
Furthermore
Linking Words
, 19% and 5% of
water
Use synonyms
were used for dairy and rice respectively
whereas
Linking Words
the percentage of them was 21% and 19% respectively in the income generation
chart
Use synonyms
.
Submitted by abhari1997 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Vocabulary: Replace the words charts, water, chart with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 8 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
What to do next:
Look at other essays: