the first car appeared on Britsh roads in 1888. By the year 2000 there may be as many as 29 million vehicles on British roads. Alternative forms of trasport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use. to what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is true that automobile ownership went up dramatically over the

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three decades. It automatically leads to

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congestion

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in cities in many countries of the world. We cannot limit the number of

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possessions to deal with

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issue.

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, the

government

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should think about some solutions to persuade

people

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to refrain from using their own transport in order to reduce the

traffic

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. The demand for

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purchase has increased remarkably and it makes

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companies produce and release a high number of

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production as well. Simultaneously, the

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does not provide equitable infrastructures,

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as street space and alternative motorways.

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, it is normal that

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congestion

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happens because the number of

cars

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is not proportional to the facility provided. Another reason is that the price of

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is affordable and

people

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can get a

car

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easily. In my opinion, there are several actions that

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government

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can take to settle

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complicated problem.

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, whilst the vehicle companies produce their

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, the

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should build and develop the road infrastructure in order to give enough space for many vehicles to minimise the

congestion

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of

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.

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, the

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can collaborate with

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companies in producing small smart

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. The advancement of technology today is sufficient to create innovation in

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production.

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but not least

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that

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government

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should provide many alternative

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transportation

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for the public

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as trans-city buses, sky trains, and underground trains which offer better, safer, faster and more affordable transportation facilities.

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,

people

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will tend to choose public

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than using their own

cars

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.

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, the

traffic

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jam

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will substantially

reduce

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.

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,

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possession could not be circumscribed by restricting

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from buying it, as evident in the

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three decades. Rather more effective ways to tackle the heinous

traffic

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congestion

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are there that

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government

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the government

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might select to tackle that issue.