The given line graph illustrates the figure for carbon dioxide emitted by each person in four countries in Europe over a span of 40 years, from 1967 to 2007.

The given line graph illustrates the figure for carbon dioxide emitted by each person in four countries in Europe over a span of 40 years, from 1967 to 2007.
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The given line graph illustrates the
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for
carbon
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dioxide
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emitted by each person in four countries in Europe over a span of 40 years, from 1967 to 2007.
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, the amount of
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dioxide
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emissions in the United Kingdom took the lead throughout the entire period,
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that of Portugal had the lowest
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.
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,
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number in Italy and Portugal experienced an upward trend, whilst that of the United Kingdom and Sweden the opposite is true. Regarding each person who emitted
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dioxide
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in the UK, standing at the highest
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compared to others(about 11 metric
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of CO2 emissions)
initially
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, after which it had slightly decreased to 9 metric
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in 2007.
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, the average
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dioxide
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emissions per individual in Sweden rose steadily to reach its peak of 10.5 metric
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in 1977, but
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this
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number hit a low in the next three decades, particularly plummeting to approximately 5 metric
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in 2007. Turning to Italy and Portugal, the data on the former started at just 4 metric
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in 1967 and
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witnessed a marginal increase to nearly 8 metric
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after 40 years.
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the aforementioned nation,
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for the latter soared to more than 5 metric
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in 1997(
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that in 1967 just at 1 metric ton), and in the
last
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decade,
this
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number remained unchanged
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