There are many
museums
have charge for the ticket. Nowadays,
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are popular as
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tourist spots and with the cluster of visitors, many
museums
have
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policy of charging for
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entrance.
Whereas
some
museums
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free. I personally believe that the admission
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cause more benefits
thatCorrect word choice
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the advantages, described in the following paragraphs.
To begin
with, it is undeniable that in the present day,
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museums
such
as history
museumFix the agreement mistake
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,
artsChange the noun form
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natural
museumFix the agreement mistake
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etc.
beingWrong verb form
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popular and becoming one of
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touristsChange the noun form
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destinationChange to a plural noun
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.
Following
this
, the
museums
have to hire more staff and security guards in order to
makingChange the verb
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the best experiences for their customers, so it is not
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that some
museums
will charge the entering
fees
. Charging the entering costs
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to Change preposition
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many
beneficialReplace the word
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such
as expenditure for maintenance, salaries for staff and improving the
museums
.
Firstly
, the
museum
will
hasChange the verb form
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sufficient
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in order to do the maintenance
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not only
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the statements or arts, but
also
the
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and
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facilities in the
museum
.
Secondly
, staff and security guards will gain more service minds and
beingWrong verb form
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happy
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the salaries
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. After that, with more money, the
museum
can
and improve
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the pieces that they
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. To illustrate,
ThaiCorrect article usage
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museum
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campaign
ofChange preposition
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the national Thai dress competition and it caught
peopleChange noun form
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after the
museum
increased the
enteringReplace the word
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price for adults.
Additionally
, there is one drawback of charging
fees
which is not everyone can get in. People who
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to pass through the door need to pay for the ticket.
Following
this
, it causes
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decreasingReplace the word
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ofChange preposition
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customer admission compared to other
museums
that have free entrance.
To conclude
,
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museums
should charge
for Change preposition
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entrance
fees
because the money they
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can be turned into many positive
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for the visitors
outweighWrong verb form
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the negative influences.