The given chart provides information about the weekly outcomes of families in 1968 and 2018.

The given chart provides information about the weekly outcomes of families in 1968 and 2018.
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This
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graphic illustrates the comparison of the distribution of weekly expenses of the household on various activities in 1968 and 2018.
Overall
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, the spending was reduced on food, clothing, footwear and personal goods
while
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an increase in the budget consumption was seen in housing , transport and leisure activities.
However
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, no change was detected in the household goods purchase. In 1968, the highest allocation of family income was reserved for meals peaking at about one-third of the total salary,
whereas
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all the remaining goods required less than 10 per
cent
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each of the total revenue.Over the next five decades, there was a dramatic drop in food expenditure to reach half of its initial value.
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, the garments, personal belongings and power requirements were all reduced by almost half to come to a low of less than 5 per
cent
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.
In contrast
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, the money spent on spare-time activities rose significantly from under 10 per
cent
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to one-fifth of the weekly revenue.A similar trend was seen in the housing and transport needs with their values doubling in fifty years.
However
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, the household items required the same amount of money over these years remaining steady at 7 per
cent
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