The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.

The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.
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The provided line graph illustrates the average CO2
emissions
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per person in the United
Kingdom
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, Sweden, Italy, and Portugal from 1967 to 2007. In general, it is evident that the United
Kingdom
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had the highest carbon
emissions
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compared to the other countries.
Additionally
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, both the United
Kingdom
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and Sweden experienced a decline in their carbon
emissions
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over the given period,
while
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Italy and Portugal witnessed an increase. In 1967, individuals in the United
Kingdom
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emitted slightly above 10
tonnes
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of CO2, which gradually decreased and reached approximately 8.5
tonnes
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in 2007.
On the other hand
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, carbon dioxide
emissions
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for individuals in Sweden were around 8.5
tonnes
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in 1967, peaked at 10.2
tonnes
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in 1977, and
then
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declined to below 6
tonnes
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in 2007. Italy
initially
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started with 4
tonnes
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of CO2
emissions
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per person,
while
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Portugal began at 1.5
tonnes
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. Both countries experienced an increase in
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and reached 6.3 and 2.1
tonnes
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respectively in 1977.
Subsequently
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, both countries witnessed a
further
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rise in
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until 2007, with Italy below 8
tonnes
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and Portugal around 7.1
tonnes
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words emissions, kingdom, tonnes with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • carbon dioxide emissions
  • per person
  • United Kingdom
  • Sweden
  • Italy
  • Portugal
  • graph
  • compare
  • average
  • increase
  • decrease
  • trend
  • peak
  • decline
  • years
  • period
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