The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.
The provided line graph illustrates the average CO2
emissions
per person in the United Kingdom
, Sweden, Italy, and Portugal from 1967 to 2007.
In general, it is evident that the United Kingdom
had the highest carbon emissions
compared to the other countries. Additionally
, both the United Kingdom
and Sweden experienced a decline in their carbon emissions
over the given period, while
Italy and Portugal witnessed an increase.
In 1967, individuals in the United Kingdom
emitted slightly above 10 tonnes
of CO2, which gradually decreased and reached approximately 8.5 tonnes
in 2007. On the other hand
, carbon dioxide emissions
for individuals in Sweden were around 8.5 tonnes
in 1967, peaked at 10.2 tonnes
in 1977, and then
declined to below 6 tonnes
in 2007.
Italy initially
started with 4 tonnes
of CO2 emissions
per person, while
Portugal began at 1.5 tonnes
. Both countries experienced an increase in emissions
and reached 6.3 and 2.1 tonnes
respectively in 1977. Subsequently
, both countries witnessed a further
rise in emissions
until 2007, with Italy below 8 tonnes
and Portugal around 7.1 tonnes
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