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The chart below contains information provided by Australia's tertiary insititutions about the percentage of male and female students who enrolled in different subjects in 1995.

The chart below contains information provided by Australia's tertiary insititutions about the percentage of male and female students who enrolled in different subjects in 1995.
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 the proportion of boys and girls participating in eight curriculums in Australia in 1995.
Overall
, the percentage of male
students
 who majored in accounting & economics, maths & sciences, computing and engineering were higher than female
students
.
By contrast
, there were more girls in
arts
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 & humanities, health, education and business studies fields. It is clear from the graph that the proportion of male
students
 who took engineering subjects was the highest one among all courses, with 18%.
In contrast
 to female
students
, that
figure
 was only 2.5%. The same tendency happened in maths & sciences, computing and accounting & economics too, where male
students
 accounted for 14%, 10% and 13%, but those
figure
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figures
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 for female
students
 were 6%, 4% and 11% respectively. There were different
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 in other subjects. As for arts & humanities, there were 18% female
students
 choosing to study in
this
 aspect,
while
 only 12% boys interested in
this
 subject. Apart from that, the percentage of girls who studied
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health
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 15%, which is more
three
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 times
than
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boys
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of boys
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.
Moreover
, 10%
female
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students
decieded
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decided
 to learn education,
while
 the
figure
 for
male
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males
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 was 6%.
Additionally
, in business studies, the percentage of female
students
 was
silghtly
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slightly
 higher than male
students
, with
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figure
 of 9%.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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