nfluence of human beings on the world ecosystem is leading to the extinction of species and loss of biodiversity. What are the primary causes of loss of bio diversity? What solution can you suggest?

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hunting of wild

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causes ecological. Because of the money, some hunters disobeyed the government's rules has

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consequences for the

enviroment

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environment

. The sortely of wildlife can be

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so that some species become"

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for testing and making their goods.

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used

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skin to make

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and

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the reason why some types of

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animal

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rare

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breed. To solve

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problem, the government needs to apply and strictly enforce laws to prevent indiscriminate animal slaughter.The government must

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create

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code

for

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protect the habitat of wild

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. In

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, they

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built many “wild

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mean that the zoo will be built

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to natural

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and not only make more profit but

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can conserve the rare

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make

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experience

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on

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animals

can be

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good choice . Nowadays, lots of

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such

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the label to “ no animal testing”

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tell to the user that their goods are friendly with the environment. In conclusion,

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the

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balance between

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nature

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and

animals

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from human’

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we need

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rule

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strong enough the

safe

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our planet.