The line graph and pie chart below show information on crime in the UK for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The pointed line graph shows the fluctuation of
crime
rate based on the relationship between age and Correct article usage
the crime
crime
. As we can see, children from 0 to 8 years old nobodys
had committed a Correct your spelling
nobody
crime
, but others from the age 8 to 12 did
almost 5 thousand Verb problem
committed
crimes
. The line from 12 and 20 years old rosed up and to achieve peaks of 70 and 80 thousand crimes
. Around the age of 24 young people became more quiet.
The pie chart describes the different types of crime
. The most crimes
committed were violent crime
which have the biggest slice of Fix the agreement mistake
crimes
pie
with 46%. Property Correct article usage
the pie
crimes
and drug crimes
23
% and 22% respectively. The Add a missing verb
are 23
last
one, which is the public order crimes
is a slice that have
the smallest size because in 9%, so Change the verb form
has
the
almost half of the
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apply
Overall
, many young guys of 20 years old more or less have
committed violent Unnecessary verb
apply
crimes
last
year.Submitted by bucciarellianna3 on
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