The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities.
The table provides data about the year of establishment, length, and number of users of the underground railway systems in six big
cities
in the world.
Firstly
, in Europe are located the oldest and the longest metro among the presented. In London, which was opened in 1863, the longest railway accounts for 394 kilometres of route, follows
by Paris with around a half compared to London’s duration, 199 kilometres only. The shortest metro is in Wrong verb form
followed
Kyoto
, Japan, however
the youngest railway system is in Los Angeles, US, and it is almost 2.5 times longer compared to Kyoto
, albeit has a similar capacity.
Interestingly, in terms of passengers
per year accumulated amount of total European cities
is approximately equal to the total Japanese cities
, however
, there is a disproportion among the cities
. Tokyo serves the biggest amount of passengers
, 1927 million a year, while
another Japanese city, Kyoto
presents the smallest amount of 45 million only, whereas
Paris is on
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the
third one with 1191 and 775 million Correct article usage
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passengers
respectively.
Lastly
, Washington DC, is the only city that consistently holds the
fourth place in all the categories.
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Overall
, there is a correlation between the date of opening and length, with the small exception of Kyoto
, however
, there is no connection between the size of the subways and the number of passengers
who use this
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