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The tables below give information about sales of Fairtade- labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summsrise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The tables below give information about sales of Fairtade- labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summsrise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
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 the fair trade-labelled
sales
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 of both
bananas
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 and
coffee
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 products between 1999 and 2004 in 5 distinct European nations.
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, it can be observed that the
bananas
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sales
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 were generally higher than the
coffee
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 even though both of them saw a significant increase.
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, all of the nation witnessed a rise in
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sales
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,
whereas
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 the
bananas
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sales
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 declined in Sweden and Denmark. looking at
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coffee
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, where the
sales
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 of each country stayed at the level of no more than 2
million
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 euros adapt for Switzerland reaching 3
million
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 in 1999. As for the UK, its
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 remarkably went up by more than ten times in 1999 at 1.5
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,
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 Switzerland
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 Belgium just doubled themself from exactly 3 and 1
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 to approximately 6 and 2
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, respectively. in terms of the remaining nations, of which
sales
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 possessed a minor shift under 2
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. turning to
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bananas
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sales
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, Switzerland was outstanding when compared with others in both mentioned years, which quadrupled itself in order to reach roughly 45
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 in 2004. with regards to other countries, their sale of
bananas
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 saw a slight change ranging from in the neighbourhood of 0.5
million
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 to 5.5
million
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.
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