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These days Internet –based courses have become a popular alternative to University – based courses. Some students prefer this type of learning because they do not need to attend lectures. Others argue that it is important to study at university. Discuss both these views and give your opinion

#internet #courses #alternative #university #students #type #lectures #study
some people claim that Internet-based courses
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 popular among people and some students prefer to choose
this
 type of learning
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since they
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are not
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force
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 to go to university and give
lecture
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a lecture
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. they think it is not important that they study their courses in the
class
 at university.
it is clear that
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Internet-based is very useful because of some special situations
such
 as covid epidemy.
on the other hand
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study
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 with
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a computer
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computer
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 the students
have
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 not eye contact with their teacher
andin
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and in
and
 terms of
mentaly
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mental
, it helps to reduce stress
for
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them
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.
furthuremore
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Furthermore
, they can
lie-down
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lie down
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 and eat if their energy
come
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 down
whereas
 , they don't
let to
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eat in
the
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class
.
Also
 , they can record the
class
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recorf
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recorder
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hear
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 to that whenever
that
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they want. on the other side , some people have physical problems and they
me be
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 don't have their own vehicle .
Thus
 , it is hard for them
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they go to university on a daily basis. certainly ,
go
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 to
the
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class
 has
direct
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 effect on student's communication
due to
 their
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 with others ,
as well as
 their responsibility
about
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to
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 be on time.
Also
 ,
the
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they
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 can not cheat in
exam
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.
Hence
 , the
feedbacks
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 from their learning
are
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 real and the teachers can evaluate them better. I think the students must go to
univesity
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university
 and participate in the
class
.I look up to the attitude
due to
 their cooperation in
the
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class
 and
do
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team
work
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teamwork
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for
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 get better.
on
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 the ground
that
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work
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toghether
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together
 leads to improvement and in my opinion , it can
be
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effect
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affect
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on
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their social lives. In conclusion , both
of
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views have some advantages and some
disadvantage
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disadvantages
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.
Thurefore
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Therefore
, everyone should choose a kind of study
according to
own
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 condition.
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