The pie chart gives information on the proportion of carbohydrates, protein and fat in three different diets.

The pie chart gives information on the proportion of carbohydrates, protein and fat in three different diets.
The pie charts compare the amount of electricity produced using five different sources of fuel in two countries over two separate years. Total electricity production increased dramatically from 1980 to 2000 in both Australia and France.
While
the totals for both countries were similar, there were big differences in the fuel sources used.
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