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The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15

The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15
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The line graph illustrates how much
waste
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 was produced by companies A,
B
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 and
C
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 over a 15-year period from 2000 to 2025.
Overall
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,
while
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 the amount of
waste
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 produced in
Company
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C
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 registered a significant upward trend, that of
Company
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 A and
Company
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B
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 witnessed a reverse pattern during the surveyed period.
Company
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C
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,
additionally
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,
was
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had
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 the most dramatic changes in its
waste
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 production. In 2000,
waste
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 production in
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company
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Company
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 A accounted for 12%, which was 3% higher than that of
Company
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B
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. 5 years later,
while
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 there was a slight decline to about 11% in the figure for
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company
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Company
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 A, a modest increase to about 10% was witnessed in the data of
Company
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B
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. After that, both underwent sharp decrease to almost 8% and about 3% respectively
at the end
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 the surveyed period.
On the other hand
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, approximately 4% of the production of
waste
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 came from
company
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C
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, hitting the lowest point in the year 2000, after which
this
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 figure saw a sudden growth to about 10% in 2015.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words waste, b, c, company with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 4 times.
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