The chart below shows the amount of money given to developing countries from five organisations from 2008 to 2011.

The chart below shows the amount of money given to developing countries from five organisations from 2008 to 2011.
The following diagram represents the amount of monetary
supports
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given to developing nations from five
annonymous
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anonymous
organizations
from 2008 to 2011, indicated in a unit of
billion
dollars
.
Overall
, it can be clearly observed that
organization
2 donated the highest,
whereas
that of the
forth
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the
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fewest.
However
, it is
interersting
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interesting
to note that the trends of providing funds to those aforementioned countries
portrayed
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in various: increasing, decreasing, and fluctuating, throughout the given time frame.
To begin
with, in 2008 and 2009,
organization
3 offered the greatest amount of money among the other
organizations
at around 1.5
billion
dollars
, followed by the second and fifth
organizations
, at 1.4 and 1.3
billion
dollars
, respectively.
Hence
, in 2009, the funding distributed from the first
organization
is
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larger than the fourth one in 2008 about 0.1
billion
dolars
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dollars
. In regards
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,
in
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2010, the trends
is
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shifting in which the second
organizations
outnumbered the former top spender from the previous years at just below 2.5
billion
dollars
. Followed by the third and first
organizations
at 1.4 and 0.7
billion
dollars
, respectively, whilst that of the other two had the same figure at 0.5
billion
dollars
.
Likewise
in 2011,
similar
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the similar
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figure can be seen except the lowest rank is the fourth
organization
at less
that
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than
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0.5
billion
dollars
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words organizations, billion, dollars, organization with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "amount" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trends" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • international aid
  • developing countries
  • economic assistance
  • fluctuations
  • trend analysis
  • philanthropic organizations
  • non-governmental organizations (NGOs)
  • foreign aid
  • donor countries
  • recipient nations
  • financial contributions
  • economic conditions
  • fiscal policies
  • sustainable development
  • humanitarian aid
  • gross domestic product (GDP)
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