The chart below shows the amount of money given to developing countries from five organisations from 2008 to 2011.
The following diagram represents the amount of monetary
supports
given to developing nations from five Fix the agreement mistake
support
annonymous
Correct your spelling
anonymous
organizations
from 2008 to 2011, indicated in a unit of billion
dollars
.
Overall
, it can be clearly observed that organization
2 donated the highest, whereas
that of the forth
Correct your spelling
fourth
the
fewest. Add a missing verb
was the
However
, it is interersting
to note that the trends of providing funds to those aforementioned countries Correct your spelling
interesting
portrayed
in various: increasing, decreasing, and fluctuating, throughout the given time frame.
Add a missing verb
are portrayed
To begin
with, in 2008 and 2009, organization
3 offered the greatest amount of money among the other organizations
at around 1.5 billion
dollars
, followed by the second and fifth organizations
, at 1.4 and 1.3 billion
dollars
, respectively. Hence
, in 2009, the funding distributed from the first organization
is
larger than the fourth one in 2008 about 0.1 Wrong verb form
was
billion
dolars
.
In regards Correct your spelling
dollars
with
, Change preposition
to
in
2010, the trends Change preposition
apply
is
shifting in which the second Change the verb form
are
organizations
outnumbered the former top spender from the previous years at just below 2.5 billion
dollars
. Followed by the third and first organizations
at 1.4 and 0.7 billion
dollars
, respectively, whilst that of the other two had the same figure at 0.5 billion
dollars
. Likewise
in 2011, similar
figure can be seen except the lowest rank is the fourth Add an article
the similar
a similar
organization
at less that
0.5 Correct word choice
than
billion
dollars
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