The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reportion the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line chart illustrates the number of
people
living in four different countries in Asia ( Philippines, Malaysia
, Thailand, and Indonesia
) between 1970 and 2020, and the predictions for the years 2030 and 2040. Overall
, the Philippines and Malaysia
had the highest percentages at the beginning of the period
, while
Thailand and Indonesia
had the lowest. It is expected that the populations of the four countries to increase
at the end
of the period
.
The people
of Malaysia
accounted for 30% in 1970,
and started to Remove the comma
apply
increase
during the period
with a slight decline in 1990 to around 45%, it is forecast that the number of people
to be above 80% in 2040. The Philippines, had almost the same population rate as Malaysia
in 1970 around 30%, after that, it showed fluctuation in 1990 around 48%, and dropped to 40% in 2010. While
it is expected to reach 50% in 2040.
In 1970, Thailand accounted for almost 20% of the total population of Asia, starting to increase
throughout the period
to around 30% in 2020, which is predicted to be 45% in 2040. Indonesia
, on the other hand
, had the lowest rate of population in 1970 at 11%, but it witnessed a sharp increase
in 2000 and 2010, of 26% and 41%, respectively. The percentage of people
in Indonesia
is expected to be more than 60% in 2040.Submitted by nidaa_hamed on
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