The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry.

The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry.
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This
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image shows the process of producing
bricks
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for constructing cases.
Overall
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, there are 7 stages starting from digging land to doing some processes in the factory and eventually delivering to customers. In the first level,
clay
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is dug by diggers and poured over the metal grids to be filtered.
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, the pile of
clay
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is carried by a roller to the workshop brick. Before preparing
bricks
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, a mixture of sand and water will be added to the
clay
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. In the preparation process of brick, there are two ways to make it. One method is cutting
bricks
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with a wire cutter and the other one is moulding them.
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this
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level, the pile of
bricks
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is transferred into a drying oven to be dried for 24 to 48 hours. There are three sections in the heating and cooling part. In the first and second sections, the pile of
clay
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is heated in kilns at moderate degrees – 200C to 980C – and high degrees – 870C to 1300C – respectively. The third section is a cooling chamber which lets them cool for 2 to 3 days. The next phase is the packaging part and at the final stage, the packaged
bricks
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are loaded onto a truck to be delivered to their locations.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words bricks, clay, c with synonyms.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • diagram
  • manufacture
  • bricks
  • building industry
  • process
  • dig
  • prepare
  • clay
  • mold
  • shape
  • dry
  • fire
  • kiln
  • cool
  • package
  • fired
  • overview
  • importance
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