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the bar chart shows attendance of people in different ages in music events in Autralia in 2006

the bar chart shows attendance of people in different ages in music events in Autralia in 2006
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Contained in the graphic is information pertaining to the attendance rate for three types of music events for Australians in different
age
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groups
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 during 2006. The figures are provided in percentages. Generally speaking, classical was the least common genre for most
age
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 types, with the exception of the 55+ audience, where the popular
type
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 was the least common.
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, the popular genre in the 15–24
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 was the most popular. Under
further
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it is clear that
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 the classical rate was the lowest in most
groups
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, with a proportion ranging from 8% to 11%,
whereas
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 the popular genre was the lowest in the 55+
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, with just 5%.
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, opera in the 35–44
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group
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 was more common than in other
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groups
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, with a quarter,
while
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 other
groups
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 were in the range of 13%–15%, respectively. Turning to the remaining
statistic
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, it can be observed that popularity was the most common
type
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 in the first three
age
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 ranges.
In addition
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, the
popular
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 rate in the 15–24
group
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 was the highest of the three mentioned
groups
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, with just over a third of 5%. Meanwhile, the 25-34
group
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 and the 35-44
group
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, where the popular
type
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 was
also
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 the most common
type
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, showed that the 25-34
group
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 (27%) was lower than the 35-44
group
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 (33%) by 6%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words age, groups, type, group with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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