The table below shows social and economic indicators for four countries in 1994, according to United Nations statistics. Describe the information shown below in your own words.
The table displays social and
economics
factors in Replace the word
economic
Canada
, Japan
, Peru, and Zair in the year 1994 based on United Nations figures. Overall
, Japan
had the highest annual income, and Zaire
had the lowest rate
. Japan
also
had the highest life expectancy at birth and Zaire
had the lowest. While
Canada
had the highest daily calorie consumption per person, Zaire
recorded the lowest number. However
, Canada
and Japan
had the same ratio of adult literacy and Zaire
had the lowest.
The annual income per person was the highest in Japan
of
15760 US dollars, Change preposition
at
while
was the lowest in Zaire
of
130 US dollars. Change preposition
at
Canada
and Japan
had almost the same ratio of life expectancy at 76, and 78, respectively. Whereas
, Zaire
had the low rate
at 47.
However
, the daily calorie consumption was high in Canada
at 3326 per person, and Zaire
had the lowest portion of 1749. In Japan
and Canada
, the adult literacy rate
was the same of
99%, Change preposition
at
on the other hand
, Zaire
had the lowest rate
of
34%. Peru had come in the middle between all three countries in different categories.Change preposition
at
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