The pie charts below show the result of a survey of children’s activities. The first chart shows the cultural and leisure activities that boys participate in, whereas the second chart shows the activities in which the girls participate. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The two pie charts compare the survey
result
of Fix the agreement mistake
results
boys
and Change noun form
boys'
boy's
girls
participation in various free time and cultural activities.
The data is calibrated in percentage.
Change noun form
girls'
girl's
Overall
, the
most of the Correct article usage
apply
boys
are highly inclined towards games while
the
significant ratio of Correct article usage
a
girls
opted dancing
.
It is noticeable from the graph, Change preposition
for dancing
just
more than one-third of Correct pronoun usage
that just
boys
played computer games while
2.6% preferred playing Basketball. Furthermore
, more than one-tenth of them liked to do Skateboarding and Soccer was preferred by 17% of boys
. A very less
proportion of Fix the agreement mistake
low
boys
opted to read books, at 2%.
Surprisingly, listening to music was an activity which was equally enjoyed by boys
and girls
, at 10%.
Switching to girls
activities, the most popular interest among Change noun form
girls'
girl's
girls
was dancing with
27% and reading at 21%, unlike Change preposition
at
boys
. 11% and 15% preferred gymnastics, and netball.
Interestingly, playing computer games was not much
famous among Rephrase
as
girls
as compared to boys
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