People now days send text massages more frequently than they talk the phone. What are the reasons for this trend ? Do the advantages of texting out weigh the disadvantages ?
Curently,
people
can be Use synonyms
choosen
sending anything by tex Correct your spelling
chosen
massage
mostly compering they are used by Use synonyms
call
Correct your spelling
cell
phone
. Some Use synonyms
people
Use synonyms
are
Unnecessary verb
apply
choosen
it because Correct your spelling
choosing
chosen
Use synonyms
text
message is more simple and Add an article
a text
overcome
Correct subject-verb agreement
overcomes
criminaliazation
, but there are some Correct your spelling
criminalisation
advantage
and Fix the agreement mistake
advantages
disadvantage
. Fix the agreement mistake
disadvantages
This
essay will explain both views.
On the one hand. The Linking Words
people
are simple if they are using Use synonyms
text
Use synonyms
Use synonyms
massage
for sending Correct your spelling
message
information
or Use synonyms
followback
Correct your spelling
follow back
follow-back
chating
from someone. Correct your spelling
chatting
However
, it is essential to filter any Linking Words
information
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or
before sending something. Correct word choice
apply
Consequently
, it is more Linking Words
effectively
and time management for getting Change the word
effective
information
or sending Use synonyms
information
from some Use synonyms
people
. Use synonyms
In addition
, Nowadays many Linking Words
criminalization
Replace the word
criminals
are
using talk the Change the verb form
is
phone
, so few Use synonyms
people
have Use synonyms
traumatized
Add a missing verb
been traumatized
about
calling Change preposition
by
from
someone Change preposition
apply
who
they do not know, Change the pronoun
whom
for
Linking Words
example
some Add the comma(s)
example,
a
Correct article usage
apply
crimnal
call Correct your spelling
criminals
say
he or she Fix the infinitive
to say
are
from Change the verb form
is
bank
to request money. Before Correct article usage
a bank
people
analyze it, they will give their money without knowing Use synonyms
information
Use synonyms
Linking Words
that
is real or fake. After that, they got tricked. Correct pronoun usage
apply
As a result
, they Linking Words
have
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had
bad
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a bad
experience
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experiences
to
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using
use
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Correct article usage
a call
call
Correct your spelling
cell
Use synonyms
phone
for communication, so Fix the agreement mistake
phones
that
they determined Correct word choice
apply
using
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to use
text
Use synonyms
Use synonyms
massage
.
Correct your spelling
messages
On the other hand
, Linking Words
the
Correct article usage
apply
postive
Correct your spelling
positive
people
are using call Use synonyms
Use synonyms
phone
because they can communicate with their Fix the agreement mistake
phones
familly
, Correct your spelling
family
for
Linking Words
instance
if they have Add the comma(s)
instance,
stay
different Wrong verb form
stayed in
place
where they can Fix the agreement mistake
places
use
Use synonyms
vedio
Correct your spelling
video
call
Fix the agreement mistake
calls
for
cummunication Change preposition
to
by
their parents, brother and sister. Change preposition
with
As a result
, it is more effectively Linking Words
compering
to Verb problem
compared
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use
sending Verb problem
apply
Use synonyms
massage
.
Correct your spelling
messages
To sum up
, Linking Words
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text
message is Add an article
a text
the text
populer
Correct your spelling
popular
for
most Change preposition
among
citizen
nowadays since it is Fix the agreement mistake
citizens
straighforward
to Correct your spelling
straightforward
use
and Use synonyms
also
Linking Words
people
have overcome criminalization by using Use synonyms
call
Correct your spelling
cell
Use synonyms
phone
. Fix the agreement mistake
phones
In addition
, other Linking Words
people
Use synonyms
prefered
using some call Correct your spelling
prefer
phone
with their Use synonyms
familly
since it is pivotal for Correct your spelling
family
people
staying Use synonyms
different
Change preposition
in different
place
with Fix the agreement mistake
places
them
relatives Correct pronoun usage
their
whom
Change the pronoun
who
using
Wrong verb form
use
call
Correct your spelling
cell
phone
.Use synonyms
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