People now days send text massages more frequently than they talk the phone. What are the reasons for this trend ? Do the advantages of texting out weigh the disadvantages ?
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people
can be choosen
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chosen
massage
mostly compering they are used by call
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cell
phone
. Some people
are
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apply
choosen
it because Correct your spelling
choosing
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text
message is more simple and Add an article
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overcome
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overcomes
criminaliazation
, but there are some Correct your spelling
criminalisation
advantage
and Fix the agreement mistake
advantages
disadvantage
. Fix the agreement mistake
disadvantages
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essay will explain both views.
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are simple if they are using text
massage
for sending Correct your spelling
message
information
or followback
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follow back
follow-back
chating
from someone. Correct your spelling
chatting
However
, it is essential to filter any information
or
before sending something. Correct word choice
apply
Consequently
, it is more effectively
and time management for getting Change the word
effective
information
or sending information
from some people
. In addition
, Nowadays many criminalization
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criminals
are
using talk the Change the verb form
is
phone
, so few people
have traumatized
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been traumatized
about
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by
from
someone Change preposition
apply
who
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whom
for
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some Add the comma(s)
example,
a
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apply
crimnal
call Correct your spelling
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say
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to say
are
from Change the verb form
is
bank
to request money. Before Correct article usage
a bank
people
analyze it, they will give their money without knowing information
that
is real or fake. After that, they got tricked. Correct pronoun usage
apply
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, they have
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had
bad
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a bad
experience
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experiences
to
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using
use
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a call
call
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cell
phone
for communication, so Fix the agreement mistake
phones
that
they determined Correct word choice
apply
using
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to use
text
massage
.
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messages
On the other hand
, the
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apply
postive
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positive
people
are using call phone
because they can communicate with their Fix the agreement mistake
phones
familly
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family
for
instance
if they have Add the comma(s)
instance,
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different Wrong verb form
stayed in
place
where they can Fix the agreement mistake
places
use
vedio
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video
call
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calls
for
cummunication Change preposition
to
by
their parents, brother and sister. Change preposition
with
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, it is more effectively compering
to Verb problem
compared
use
sending Verb problem
apply
massage
.
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messages
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, text
message is Add an article
a text
the text
populer
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popular
for
most Change preposition
among
citizen
nowadays since it is Fix the agreement mistake
citizens
straighforward
to Correct your spelling
straightforward
use
and also
people
have overcome criminalization by using call
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cell
phone
. Fix the agreement mistake
phones
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, other people
prefered
using some call Correct your spelling
prefer
phone
with their familly
since it is pivotal for Correct your spelling
family
people
staying different
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in different
place
with Fix the agreement mistake
places
them
relatives Correct pronoun usage
their
whom
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who
using
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use
call
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cell
phone
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