People now days send text massages more frequently than they talk the phone. What are the reasons for this trend ? Do the advantages of texting out weigh the disadvantages ?

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Curently,
people
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can be
choosen
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chosen
sending anything by tex
massage
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mostly compering they are used by
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cell
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phone
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. Some
people
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are
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choosen
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choosing
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it because
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text
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message is more simple and
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overcomes
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criminaliazation
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criminalisation
, but there are some
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advantages
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and
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disadvantages
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.
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people
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massage
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for sending
information
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or
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follow back
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chating
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chatting
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, it is essential to filter any
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before sending something.
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and time management for getting
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or sending
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from some
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, Nowadays many
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are
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using talk the
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, so few
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have
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about
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calling
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someone
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they do not know,
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example
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some
a
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crimnal
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criminals
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say
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he or she
are
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from
bank
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a bank
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to request money. Before
people
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analyze it, they will give their money without knowing
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that
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is real or fake. After that, they got tricked.
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, they
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bad
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experience
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to
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use
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a call
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call
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cell
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phone
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phones
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for communication, so
that
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they determined
using
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text
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massage
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messages
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.
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,
the
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positive
people
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are using call
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phone
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phones
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because they can communicate with their
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family
,
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if they have
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where they can
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video
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for
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cummunication
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their parents, brother and sister.
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, it is more effectively
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to
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use
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sending
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massage
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messages
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.
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,
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text
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a text
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message is
populer
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popular
for
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among
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most
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citizens
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nowadays since it is
straighforward
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straightforward
to
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and
also
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people
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have overcome criminalization by using
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cell
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phone
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phones
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.
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, other
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prefered
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prefer
using some call
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with their
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family
since it is pivotal for
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staying
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in different
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place
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places
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with
them
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their
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relatives
whom
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who
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using
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use
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call
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cell
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phone
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