The pie charts below show the result of a survey of children’s activities. The first chart shows the cultural and leisure activities that boys participate in, whereas the second chart shows the activities in which the girls participate. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts below show the result of a survey of children’s activities. The first

chart shows the cultural and leisure activities that boys participate in, whereas

the second chart shows the activities in which the girls participate.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make

comparisons where relevant.
The two pie charts compare the survey results of
boys
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and
girls
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girls'
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participation in various free time and cultural activities.The data is calibrated in percentage.
Overall
, most of the
boys
are highly inclined towards games
while
a significant ratio of
girls
opted for dancing. It is noticeable from the graph, that just more than one-third of
boys
played computer games
while
2.6% preferred playing Basketball.
Furthermore
, more than one-tenth of them liked to do Skateboarding and Soccer was preferred by 17% of
boys
. A very low proportion of
boys
opted to read books, at 2%. Surprisingly, listening to music was an activity which was equally enjoyed by
boys
and
girls
, at 10%. Switching to
girl's
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activities, the most popular interest among
girls
was dancing at 27% and reading at 21%, unlike
boys
. 11% and 15% preferred gymnastics, and netball. Interestingly, playing computer games was not as famous among
girls
as compared to
boys
.
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