The graph below gives information about the price of bananas in four countries between 1994 and 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information about the price of bananas in four countries between 1994 and 2004.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the cost of bananas in four selected countries over a
period
of 10 years from 1994 to 2004. Looking at the
overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that each sector, apart from the USA, experienced a considerable fluctuation in its spending during the entire time
period
.
Firstly
, the country with the greatest number of dollars per kilogram is Japan throughout the years. At the beginning of the
period
, Japan had the highest prices of bananas in comparison to other countries. Between 1996 to 1998, the value of France bananas remained stable at 2. 
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Furthermore
Germany, whose figure stood at just about 1.25 in 1999, witnessed a considerable rise in its consumption to approximately 2 in 2002. A relatively low figure was observed in the United States with their consumption remaining at around 1 between 1996 and 1997, and stayed stable at about 1.25 for the rest of the
period
.
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