The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. Summurise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature, and make comparisons where relevant

The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018.

Summurise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature, and make comparisons where relevant
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The line charts illustrate eight different categories on which one country spent the weekly wage over a period of 40 years from 1968 to 2018. Looking at the
overall
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perspectives, it is readily apparent that families had the highest prices of
food
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in comparison to other categories.
Firstly
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, the class with the greatest proportion of average spending is
Food
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in 1968.
Food
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, whose figure stood at 35% in 1968, witnessed a considerable decrease in its consumption to around 17% in 2018.
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, the 40-year Household goods weekly salary was about 8
percent
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, indicating similarity.
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Leisure, the figure of which stood at just about 8% in 1968, experienced a significant rise in its consumption to 23% in the 40-year timescale. It was followed by
Food
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and Housing with each having 17% and 18% of the weekly pay in the late 2010s. Relatively low figures were observed
in
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Fuel and Power and Personal goods with their consumption remaining at a mere 4% respectively
at the end
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of the period.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words food with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stood" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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