The graph below gives information about the price of bananas in four countries between 1994 and 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the price of bananas in US dollars per kilogram in four different countries from the
year
1996 to 2004.
Overall
, it is clear that
, except for one year
, the banana price in Japan is the highest compared to others. Moreover
, this
product in the USA stays in the final place throughout the period.
To begin
with, Japanese bananas began the year
1994 at a 2 and dramatically fluctuated 1.5
in 2003. A significant increase was seen in the Change preposition
to 1.5
last
year
which arrived at 2.5. Furthermore
, the price in France also
began at 2 and hovered at this
level for two years. It slightly oscillated to 2 again in 2003 before levelling off until in 2004. What is interesting to note is that both of them are at the same number in the beginning but end the record in a meagre 0.5 gap.
Additionally
, The value of bananas in Germany was at 1.5 and swang to roughly 1.25 in 1999. It continuously escalated to 2 in 2002 and dropped as well as
remaining constant at 1.75 in 2004. Finally
, The USA which was at a miniscule 1 ended the year
2004 at approximately 1.2. What is surprising to see is that in the year
1999, both Germany and America are
at the same number which is about 1.2.Wrong verb form
were
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words year with synonyms.
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