The table below gives information about rail transport in for countries in 2007. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features abd make comparisons where relevant.

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The table chart illustrates data about

rail

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transport in four areas during

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2007.

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it is clear that

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the top-ranked

country

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was China ,

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, Canada was the lowest

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rail

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was used, despite the fact that

this

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country

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carried much more cargo than others.

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, as China is a

country

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in which

rail

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was used the most,

kilometers

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for one person was 1980, in the meantime, in Canada

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per head was 80 kilometres.

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, Canada carried 28,20 billion

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in trasportation

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trasportation

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transportation

, meanwhile, the

UAE

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had only 21,9.

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, 5,5 million

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people used

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in the

UAE

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, in Malaysia

this

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number was 5,9 million,

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in the

UAE

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kilometres for

passenger

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was 780, in the meantime, in

Malaysia

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Malaysia,

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it was 780. It is obvious that

cargo

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the cargo

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which was carried by Malaysia

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was

much more

that

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than

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in the

UAE

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Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

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The table below gives information about rail transport in for countries in 2007. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features abd make comparisons where relevant.

A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Some people think that physical strength is more important fi for success in sport, while others think that mental strength is mort important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion .

Some people believe that children learn better when they are placed in classes with children of similar academic abilities. Others believe that children learn better when they are in classes with children representing a diverse range of academic abilities. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.