The tables below give information about sales of Fairtade- labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summsrise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The tables below give information about sales of Fairtade- labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.

Summsrise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The diagrams provide the comparison data in five European regions about the number of Fairtrade profitable in
coffee
and
bananas
between 1999 and 2004. In general,
Denmark
was the country that had the highest
sales
of espresso in 1999,
while
in 2004, the top caffeine purchases became The UK. For
bananas
, Switzerland had the topmost profit-making in both 1999 and 2004. Another interesting fact was, that
Sweden
and
Denmark
were the region who were having decreased
sales
of
bananas
from 1999 to 2004. Looking at the details, as regards caffeine wholesale in 1999,
Sweden
was the province that had the lowest
profitable
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in 0.8
million
euros
.
Moreover
, Switzerland had twice as many transactions as The UK 1.5
million
euros
.
Further
, Switzerland
also
became a country with the topmost
banana
purchases in 1999, the number of
banana
sales
was third as much as the
coffee
sales
which was 15
million
euros
.
Furthermore
, the
sales
of
bananas
in Belgium were the lowest, only 0.6
million
euros
which meant that it earned far less than the other countries.
Subsequently
,
Sweden
's
coffee
sales
in 2004 were the lowest of the other countries only
in
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1
million
euros
, and
Denmark
's
sales
were twice as much as
Sweden
's. In 2004, the country that had the most
sales
of
coffee
was The UK which reached 20
million
euros
.
On the other hand
, the bottom two of
banana
sales
in 2004 were in
Denmark
and
Sweden
which only achieved 0.9 and 1
million
euros
,
however
,
banana
sales
in Belgium were fourth much as than in
Sweden
.
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