The graph below gives information about the sales of the three most commonly purchased items in a particular bakery for the year 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information about the sales of the three most commonly purchased items in a particular bakery for the year 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart compares three different items,
bread
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,
buns
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and pies, of a bakery in 2014, which are the first of the bakery's sales.
Overall
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, we can see that the 3 trends were absolutely different.
Bread
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declined in the first 3
months
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, January, February and March from $80,000 to $45,000. After that, it fluctuated for 6
months
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, until September when it rose sharply from $45,000 to $80,000.
In addition
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,
buns
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started at $40,000 and increased until May when it reached $70,000 and remained stable for 3
months
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. Afterwards, it decreased from $70,000 in August to $30,000 in December. In the end, pies had a slight increase from $10,000 in January to $20,000 in August.
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, it remained steady for 2
months
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until September when it had a sharp upward trend from $20,000 to $40,000 in December.
Additionally
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, we can observe 3 common points. The first was between
bread
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and
buns
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at approximately $55,000 a little after February. The second one was again between
bread
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and
buns
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in the half of September at $50,000 and the third one was between
buns
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and pies in the half of November at $45,000.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words bread, buns, months with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "trends" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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