The graph below gives information about the sales of the three most commonly purchased items in a particular bakery for the year 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart compares three different items,
bread
, Use synonyms
buns
and pies, of a bakery in 2014, which are the first of the bakery's sales.
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Overall
, we can see that the 3 trends were absolutely different. Linking Words
Bread
declined in the first 3 Use synonyms
months
, January, February and March from $80,000 to $45,000. After that, it fluctuated for 6 Use synonyms
months
, until September when it rose sharply from $45,000 to $80,000. Use synonyms
In addition
, Linking Words
buns
started at $40,000 and increased until May when it reached $70,000 and remained stable for 3 Use synonyms
months
. Afterwards, it decreased from $70,000 in August to $30,000 in December. In the end, pies had a slight increase from $10,000 in January to $20,000 in August. Use synonyms
Then
, it remained steady for 2 Linking Words
months
until September when it had a sharp upward trend from $20,000 to $40,000 in December.
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Additionally
, we can observe 3 common points. The first was between Linking Words
bread
and Use synonyms
buns
at approximately $55,000 a little after February. The second one was again between Use synonyms
bread
and Use synonyms
buns
in the half of September at $50,000 and the third one was between Use synonyms
buns
and pies in the half of November at $45,000.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words bread, buns, months with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "trends" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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