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Take a look at the graphic and complete the task. The table and chart show data from a survey of library users. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

Take a look at the graphic and complete the task. The table and chart show data from a survey of library users. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
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The diagrams below illustrate a study on
people
 using the
library
 by
age
.
Overall
,
it is clear that
 the
people
 in the ranges 16-17 years made the most use of the
library
,
while
 those in the
age
 category of 25-29 visited the
place
 the least. The
library
 was used mainly for 3 purposes, namely, for
research
, to borrow
books
 and to borrow newspapers. The majority of
people
 were interested in
research
.
On the other hand
, the survey showed that reading newspapers was not so popular. 72% of candidates between the
ages
 16 and 17 used the
library
, making it in the first position, followed by those in the
ages
 18-24 and 25-29 with only 58% and 54% respectively. Those between the
ages
 16-17
also
 made up most of the
people
 who used help from the librarian (43%),
while
 only 19% of those between 25-29 years got help, even though 74% of them knew the
library
is
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was
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 an important
place
.
Although
 only 27% of those between 18 and 24 took help from the librarian, they occupy the second
place
 for those who think the
library
 is important (63%). The
library
 was mainly used for the purpose of doing
research
. More than 50% of those in the
ages
 16 and 17 visited the
library
 for
research
 and half of them in
this
age
 category used the
library
 to borrow
books
 as well.
This
 was the
age
 group who were least interested in reading newspapers as only 20% of them preferred to read the paper. Those in the
ages
 18-24 were
also
 mostly interested in using the
place
 for
research
 with over 40% of them in second
place
. Just above 20% of them were interested in reading the paper,
while
 nearly 40% preferred reading
books
. The young adults between 25 and 29 years made up the least number of
people
 in all 3 sections, whether it be
research
,
books
 or the newspaper, where just over 40% were interested in
research
 and 23% were fond of reading the paper.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, while".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words people, library, age, place, research, books, ages with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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