Take a look at the graphic and complete the task. The table and chart show data from a survey of library users. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Take a look at the graphic and complete the task. The table and chart show data from a survey of library users. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagrams below illustrate a study on
people
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using the
library
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by
age
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.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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the
people
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in the ranges 16-17 years made the most use of the
library
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,
while
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those in the
age
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category of 25-29 visited the
place
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the least. The
library
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was used mainly for 3 purposes, namely, for
research
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, to borrow
books
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and to borrow newspapers. The majority of
people
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were interested in
research
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.
On the other hand
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, the survey showed that reading newspapers was not so popular. 72% of candidates between the
ages
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16 and 17 used the
library
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, making it in the first position, followed by those in the
ages
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18-24 and 25-29 with only 58% and 54% respectively. Those between the
ages
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16-17
also
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made up most of the
people
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who used help from the librarian (43%),
while
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only 19% of those between 25-29 years got help, even though 74% of them knew the
library
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an important
place
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.
Although
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only 27% of those between 18 and 24 took help from the librarian, they occupy the second
place
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for those who think the
library
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is important (63%). The
library
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was mainly used for the purpose of doing
research
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. More than 50% of those in the
ages
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16 and 17 visited the
library
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for
research
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and half of them in
this
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age
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category used the
library
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to borrow
books
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as well.
This
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was the
age
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group who were least interested in reading newspapers as only 20% of them preferred to read the paper. Those in the
ages
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18-24 were
also
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mostly interested in using the
place
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for
research
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with over 40% of them in second
place
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. Just above 20% of them were interested in reading the paper,
while
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nearly 40% preferred reading
books
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. The young adults between 25 and 29 years made up the least number of
people
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in all 3 sections, whether it be
research
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,
books
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or the newspaper, where just over 40% were interested in
research
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and 23% were fond of reading the paper.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, while".
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words people, library, age, place, research, books, ages with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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