Take a look at the graphic and complete the task. The table and chart show data from a survey of library users. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

Take a look at the graphic and complete the task.

The table and chart show data from a survey of library users.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The diagrams below illustrate a study on
people
using the
library
by
age
.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the
people
in the ranges 16-17 years made the most use of the
library
,
while
those in the
age
category of 25-29 visited the
place
the least. The
library
was used mainly for 3 purposes, namely, for
research
, to borrow
books
and to borrow newspapers. The majority of
people
were interested in
research
.
On the other hand
, the survey showed that reading newspapers was not so popular. 72% of candidates between the
ages
16 and 17 used the
library
, making it in the first position, followed by those in the
ages
18-24 and 25-29 with only 58% and 54% respectively. Those between the
ages
16-17
also
made up most of the
people
who used help from the librarian (43%),
while
only 19% of those between 25-29 years got help, even though 74% of them knew the
library
is
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an important
place
.
Although
only 27% of those between 18 and 24 took help from the librarian, they occupy the second
place
for those who think the
library
is important (63%). The
library
was mainly used for the purpose of doing
research
. More than 50% of those in the
ages
16 and 17 visited the
library
for
research
and half of them in
this
age
category used the
library
to borrow
books
as well.
This
was the
age
group who were least interested in reading newspapers as only 20% of them preferred to read the paper. Those in the
ages
18-24 were
also
mostly interested in using the
place
for
research
with over 40% of them in second
place
. Just above 20% of them were interested in reading the paper,
while
nearly 40% preferred reading
books
. The young adults between 25 and 29 years made up the least number of
people
in all 3 sections, whether it be
research
,
books
or the newspaper, where just over 40% were interested in
research
and 23% were fond of reading the paper.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words people, library, age, place, research, books, ages with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.

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