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In the past when students did a university degree they tended to study in their own country. Nowadays they have morw opportunity to study abroad. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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In the contemporary era, many graduate
students
 are flying
to
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abroad for
further
 studies in comparison with the past time.
This
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economy
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will
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decline,there are countless opportunities and
well-established
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 atmosphere for the youth.
To begin
 with,there are plenty of benefits to
study
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 in
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foreign countries. First and foremost is that plethora
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of chances
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. It has been noticed that many developed nations open their gates
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 healthcare and IT sector people with handsome pay scales.
Therefore
, many
students
 are attracted to study,work and settle in these nations.
For instance
, Canada is providing a special pathway for
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medical
students
 from around the globe to settle in their
nation
 to support
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 growth.
Moreover
,another significant benefit is modern technology with more
rely
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 on practical skills. Some economically strong countries are more
focusing
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 on practicals rather than theories.
Apart from
this
,they have
latest
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 devices to teach their learners.
For example
,many top universities
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the
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abroad are using
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smart
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 for
better
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 understanding of their
students
.
However
,migrating to
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 foreign
nation
have
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few
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 cons. The
nation
,from where graduates move,
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find
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decline
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 in their economy,because youth are the foundation of
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 and if they migrate to different regions,it will create
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 negative impact on the growth of their
nation
.
To conclude
, the younger generation is looking for the opportunities,which are provided by well-developed nations in terms of handsome salaries and digital education,
while
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from
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students
are going
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.
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