The graphs below show the number of calls a company received at their Nigerian and Indian call centres in connection wit hthe various cae models they produce.
The line charts illustrate the number of calls a company
received
at their call centre in networks with the different car types they manufacture.
Wrong verb form
receives
Overall
, the fall down can be seen in all models except model
C
The number of calls from model
A was 52 in 2010 while
, it decreased to 3 calls in 2015 and was 49. Model
B also
shows a decline with 9 calls. It is 33 in 2010 however
, it decreases to 24 in 2015, moreover
, it takes the smallest amount in both years. Model
C is the only band that shows us the incline. Though it was 71 in 2010, it goes up with 12 calls and make it 84 in 2015.
Model
D plays a major part in the chart in both years nevertheless
, it also
depicts a decline in 2015. Model
E also
represents a great drop at least as others. It received 68 calls in 2010, unfortunately, it portrays 5 fewer calls in 2015.Submitted by i.nureddinn on
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